Category: Writers Block
I've never written many poems, but I wonder if this one is good?
Thanks.
Me and You
You were such a quiet person, you never wore from assertion. Everytime I talked to you, you made me feel very blue. You were so shy, but you never let a dull moment creep bye.
You had such a sweet heart, that you made me fall in love with you at the start. Each time I would think of you, you always made my appreciation of you to bloom. You always listened to me in my time of need, and I told you about my life with glee.
When I hear your sweet voice, it reminds me of an angel calling from heaven. I want to be with you forever, and I will not forsake you ever. I will always be faithful to you whenever the time arises, and you will keep me by your side with no surprises.
Sit back and let’s enjoy the night, and the fireflies that fly bye. Let’s listen to the chirp of birds as they go bye in a blur.
You and I can talk for hours, and still not be bored. We just have something for each other and nothing more.
I found a mistake:
Here is the new one.
Me and You
You were such a quiet person, you never wore from assertion. Everytime I talked to you, you made me feel like noe one could, you just kept talking, and I listened good. You were so shy, but you never let a dull moment creep bye.
You had such a sweet heart, that you made me fall in love with you at the start. Each time I would think of you, you always made my appreciation of you to bloom. You always listened to me in my time of need, and I told you about my life with glee.
When I hear your sweet voice, it reminds me of an angel calling from heaven. I want to be with you forever, and I will not forsake you ever. I will always be faithful to you whenever the time arises, and you will keep me by your side with no surprises.
Sit back and let’s enjoy the night, and the fireflies that fly bye. Let’s listen to the chirp of birds as they go bye in a blur.
You and I can talk for hours, and still not be bored. We just have something for each other and nothing more.
That's nice. I hope whoever you wrote it for likes it too.